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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this premise a lot. One thing, though; you have a lot of run-on sentances. You might want to have your beta break up the paragraphs a little. You\'re using commas a lot where a full-stop should be. Other than that, I really like this story.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting I like it!!!! Please keep going!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely dying to read more... You have me on the edge of my seat. Very original and massive potential. Can\'t wait for the update!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great new story idea! And a very terrible cliffy. What\'s he gonna do? I need to know. LOL It made me laugh when he realized his genie was Granger. I\'m surprised that he didn\'t think it was a joke Blaise played on him. Great story - continue soon. (And don\'t forget your other story! Waiting for that one too.)
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. Finally, an original Draco/Hermione story. I\'m looking forward to more.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you tease!!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like the plot! I can\'t wait to see what happens next. review soon!!!