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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! It's so cute and emotional, it really makes me wish there's a sequel, lol. Great job.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot! And finely written as well. Please tell me you've written more somewhere?
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. That was both funny at the beginning and sweet. The sex scene was hot as all hell. :D I liked it a lot. Descriptive and a nice flow to the whole thing. I think it definitely needs some more chapters. :D You should think about it.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha LOVED it! what made it great was you stayed in character *perfectly* even with Sirius's whinning! good job! when will it be Sirius's turn???
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got a little skeptical when i saw the pairing but i must say, good job... quite sxe.
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first SS/SB I've ever read - it was pretty damned good! Very hot. And the way you write is awesome, I was laughing so hard at Sirius yelling "sweet fuck!" and the trademark sign after Greasy Git was priceless. I'm not too keen on Sirius since he was mean to Severus when they were in school together, so it's hard for me to say whether or not his dialogue really "matched" but you, pardon the pun, totally nailed Snape - I really enjoy it when authors write him so you can imagine him actually saying those things. Awesome job.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so hot. I love the argument. very good fic
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise of the story but there is a lot of room for improvement. The way the two characters speak and act, it seems slightly out of character. The premise of the story is very interesting and fun to; there is sexual tension, playfulness, but it seems a bit awkward and stiff and not because the characters are supposed to be like that.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!!!
abosolutly brilliant!!!
Write more like it!!
abosolutly brilliant!!!
Write more like it!!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute in a lemoney sort of way. I liked how Sirius learned his lesson from Snape, and now he wants to be permenantly bottom. Great work