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for The Dark Castle

by PureBlack

person xhedwigx
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome this is, can't wait 2 read more.
person toads70
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this fic! please update soon!!
person Marie1
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's great, I'm lookin' forward to the next update, actually, Can you send me a letter on my e-mail when you update? Not only this, but at all.
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi the stones are called stalagtites
person Raine
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't be offended. But uh.... You really need a beta reader. I love your story idea but you keep making all these errors that sortof interrupt the flow. I'm not saying this flame you really! I'd be happy to offer my services as a beta. Or if you don't want one (for whatever reason) use spell check. Your story ideas are excellent but there's a hella lot of errors.
person sky
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stone pilars - stalagmites
person litekreem
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Just a note though Chapter 5 is missing.It goes from 4 to 6
person vittani
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely fantastic, i just read the whole thing all the way through, so you know its good. Please update.
person jj
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me or does chapter nine belong to another story?
person purrfus
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, but the formating and the spelling and grammer errors made it too hard to read.