schedule
November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I\'ve read the first 5 chapters on ff.net. I like it so much! ^^ Please update soon and make more BillCharlie ficcies! Coz there\'s never be enough....
schedule
November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil, evil you!!!!
Poor Charlie!!! You have to bring them together again!!! You have to!!! Poor Charlie!!! Poor, poor, poor Charlie...
How could you make Bill so mean... :(
Please, update soon!!! I wanna read more!!!!
Hugs
K
Poor Charlie!!! You have to bring them together again!!! You have to!!! Poor Charlie!!! Poor, poor, poor Charlie...
How could you make Bill so mean... :(
Please, update soon!!! I wanna read more!!!!
Hugs
K
schedule
November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Evil you!!!
Damn! I gotta go... Training... :(
Need to read the next chapters tomorrow!!!
Wonderfulll!!!!
I love it!!! :)
Hugs
K
Damn! I gotta go... Training... :(
Need to read the next chapters tomorrow!!!
Wonderfulll!!!!
I love it!!! :)
Hugs
K
schedule
November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
grr bill how dare he be such an ass, he shud be kicked becuase hes being totally unfair
theres something wrong with your review page because my reviews keep dissapearing and i keep having to redo them and its becoming annoying but i still love the story so please see if theres anything you can do
theres something wrong with your review page because my reviews keep dissapearing and i keep having to redo them and its becoming annoying but i still love the story so please see if theres anything you can do
schedule
November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it wasnt boring, it just wasnt as exiting as usual but your right, u need these bits inbetween for it to be a good story. i still love this fic btw so keep up the good work
schedule
November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just realised that two of my reviews have dissapeared? whats going on?
schedule
November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, overall I like it, however the story line is a litle confusing and your punctuation needs a coat of looking at. But yes if you look through it again and correct the mistakes and make it a bit clearer this definately has the potential to be good.
Also a word of freindly advice, reveiwers don\'t tend to take it very well if you demand a certain amount of reveiws in exchange for a chapter and at this point in time this chapter isn\'t good enough to be demanding reviews
Also a word of freindly advice, reveiwers don\'t tend to take it very well if you demand a certain amount of reveiws in exchange for a chapter and at this point in time this chapter isn\'t good enough to be demanding reviews
schedule
November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just want to hug charlie and kiss him better.....and possibly a little more than that, and grrr bill denying his brotherly sex how dare he, he should be embracing it.
you cant leave it a few days to post because other evil people dont review (i hate these people for making you consider it), i always review and i need my daily hit of this story. dont make me cry, please xx
you cant leave it a few days to post because other evil people dont review (i hate these people for making you consider it), i always review and i need my daily hit of this story. dont make me cry, please xx
schedule
November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eek telling the parents, scary stuff, im surprised molly didnt fly off the handle but its nice charlie has support....come back bill, come baaaaaaaaaaack. love the new chapter, please do continue :D
schedule
November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooo, well yey a chapter but noooooooooooooo bill and charlie must have lots of smutty, kinky goodness for all time till they become old and wrinkly and i no longer want to read about them.
sorry,i failed with getting people to read, apparently reading incest isn\'t normal, but i will never give it up, its too good mmmm bill/charlie
post again :D
sorry,i failed with getting people to read, apparently reading incest isn\'t normal, but i will never give it up, its too good mmmm bill/charlie
post again :D