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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nicely done. anymore intereting pairings hiding in your head that you'd like to share with the rest of us?
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very nice. I would be very happy if there will be a continuation of the story. HOT.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was super hot. a few paragraphs would of been nice though.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was some hot stuff right there! I\'d love to see a another chapter as its an unusual pairing and quite good too! The only critisism I have is that you should make shorter paragraph\'s so its easier to read then. I hope I see the 2nd chapter soon! Again, great job! =)
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well When I typed it, it had paragraphs.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PARAGRAPHS PLEASE!!! It is terribly confusing without them! But other than that, a good story :-P
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the way, if you are unsure of where to start new paragraphs, here\'s a hint to start you off: every new person speaking in a conversation is a new paragraph, or at least a new line.
Eg. \"Hi!\" John said, waving to Pamela.
\"Hi,\" she replied. \"How are you?\"
\"I\'m fine thanks, and yourself?\"
\"I\'m good, thank you.\"
..blah blah blah. Anyways. Hope this helped :-P
Eg. \"Hi!\" John said, waving to Pamela.
\"Hi,\" she replied. \"How are you?\"
\"I\'m fine thanks, and yourself?\"
\"I\'m good, thank you.\"
..blah blah blah. Anyways. Hope this helped :-P
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your storys awesome, i really hope you add another chapter, there really arnt enough cedric/draco stories.