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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is wonderful. Well writting, innovative, thoughful, I really hope you decide to continue with it.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so far and it\'s such a relief, because i feel like HP fanfics these days just aren\'t as good as they once were. I have one question too, could you me who the dominant and submissive are in this story? You don\'t have to or anything, i was just curious.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, kissing!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Draco kissed him!!!
OMG! That suprised me! It was coming along in that direction but I never saw it comming and it just seemed like it came from nowhere!
ok, and now I\'m a babbling fool :-/ but I\'m so suprised.
You have to update soon. I gotta se harrys responce and soon.
OMG! That suprised me! It was coming along in that direction but I never saw it comming and it just seemed like it came from nowhere!
ok, and now I\'m a babbling fool :-/ but I\'m so suprised.
You have to update soon. I gotta se harrys responce and soon.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh! Wow. That\'s pretty much all I can say. This is really original and fresh! You did such a good job of leading to the conclusion that it was Snape in the room and the kiss at the end! Yay for that! I hate when people drag the story on for too long before I get to see some Harry/Draco lovin\'! Update soon!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo...wow! an action-packed first 2 chapters! i like how the slytherins are still in character. very much still looking out for number one (i.e. themselves!). and harry in command--sexy. :) ending with that kiss--argh! more! i want more!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I need chapter 3! Code names? Nice! Draco gave him Peter and then kissed him. What does Harry do? What explanation does Draco give?
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I like it when the characters use their wits, rather than a ton of magic stuff. I was very dissappointed when Rowling dropped the DA from Book 6, b/c it shows Harry as a leader. I can\'t wait for more.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with chapter 2! I\'m dying to know what the red armband stands for and what Draco has to say!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting start. I can\'t wait for more. I like stories with that show Draco as clever.