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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Dearie, I waited until the very end to review, because you held me enthralled throughout the entire series! You have no idea, I\'ve been literally breathless reading through this, and oh my! So good! Wonderful, well thought out, complete...rave, rave, rave! Can\'t wait to see what you do next, lovie, and please, do do something next!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best I\'ve ever read!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 Ooooh, very sneaky of Severus, apprenticing with Miss Grindelwald, getting her to evaluate Harry for apprenticeship.... Makes the Boy Wonder seem rather placid by comparison. On to the next!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very wonderful story.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Job! Once I started reading this story, I couldn\'t pull myself away until the very end. Poor Harry! My heart ached for him the whole way through. (I think you should write an extra chapter about Vernon going to prison and meeting his enormous (and child abuse hating) cellmates. After the hell he put Harry through, that would certainly give me a cruel chuckle!)
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 Well, Corvus had me going too. I thought for sure he was going to cop to the accusation. Nice job. Severus is a wise man, letting go of the folder when it was perceived to be more important than Harry, and letting Harry handle the situation when his interference could be construed as culpability and cover-up. And of course, Harry handled himself well. Well done.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the quick updates... please keep it up!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, three absolutely fantastic chapters. I am enjoying your vignette style, instead of a continuous and possibly boring timeline. The fact that we don\'t know how much time elapses between each is intriguing. In chapter six, did you mean for Severus to loose his control or lose it? (If that\'s the only criticism I can come up with, consider your marks VERY high with this English teacher.)
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Man I hope you finish this soon, \'cause I\'m dying to know what happens next. Great chapters, and I really like your portrayals of Harry and Severus. I loved how Severus jumped in to save Harry, and the way he did it was priceless. Great job, and can\'t wait for more!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this last chapter is great. I can\'t wait to see what happens in the next chapter ;)