rate_review Reviews

I stand in awe of your story telling ability.
Please write more!

Now then.. finished..! Whew.

I liked the aspect of multiple personality d/o. Very nicely done! And you didn\'t give him like.. forty two different personalities, made him aware of both, and gave him control. Quite good!

And the turn around! Kingsley.. what a snake! You\'ve got a wonderful set of heros navigating a rather political world in ways I can only applaud. I do certainly look forward to more from you! :)

Pt. 3: Yay for Severus! We need hero music. Dah tata Daaaaahhh! *g*

One more reader to tell you how dramatic, how riveting, how fabulous. All true, well-deserved accolades. My critique: Very few grammatical or usage errors, and the plot was well-paced and uniquely adorned -- abused Harry (seeming staple of fan-fic) earns his living in modeling (I haven\'t read that one before). Despite his OOC (thinking strictly of canon), Severus was still believable, especially his patient, calculated responses, his love demonstrated so far beyond mere sex--an excellent symptom of a thinking, intelligent, and self-disciplined man. The use of Ron as an enemy was brutal but fascinating; we\'ve all read so many Draco-hates-Harry stories, it\'s a change of pace to hate Ron instead. Other side characters, both JKR\'s and yours, were well-done. It takes a lot to make me hate Kingsley and feel something other than disdain for Percy. Top marks, LinW. I hope you publish more.

And I see you have a marriage propopsal from ExecutiveHPfan. Congratulations!

5: Okay... okay... I keep thinking I\'ll wait until the end, but then something happens and I want to cheer.

Egypt? Eek! Very interesting chapter and a nice movement along the story. This is grand!

I liked it. Not too overtly sexual, but had a good story as well.

I truly enjoyed reading this story. If you have more, I loook forward to reading all of them. Thank you.

Sure love the quotes.. they\'re very fitting! Nicely done!!!! *L* I\'d love to see your hoard.

Hmm... and Sev is on the verge of needing to have a serious talk and some real new types of thinking... silly man.

But bravo against Zach! What a doof! Yay Harry!!!!! :)

I was at first uncertain about the use of Ron as a \"bad guy\" but you\'ve certainly pulled it off with aplomb! Well done! And glad to see the git is going to finally get what he deserves. :)