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for Blackbird

by LinW

person Morgan LeFay
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story----it followed the full range of emotions. I actually laughed, groaned and gasped out loud. I was angry and I was happy. Well written. It's a keeper!!!
person Ansku
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful :) An excellent story, very touching and catching... I love it :)
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good.
person Nitogumi
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congradulations!
You have just written the only \"Harry is abused by the Dursleys and abandoned by Dumbledore and his friends\" story that I actually liked.
That story was absolutely amazing. It had the right ammount of angst, and romance, and smut to make it a very enjoyable read.
person avihenda
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tricky story. good read.
person Lord Localfreak
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* wonderfully written and I do love a good \'hidden identity\' fic that doesn\'t always end up turning cliche. Wonderfully refreshing and an excellent, sensitive, and brilliant fic.
person atroppa haven
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummy.
person Chloe the Grey
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I usually dislike Dumbledore/Ron/Hermione/Gryffindor bashing, but you wrote it in such a way that I was able to move past it to get to the rest of the story (if that makes sense). I thought that your characters, while ooc with canon, all stayed in character in the world you created in your story. I\'m glad that you didn\'t have Harry taken in by the Slytherins when he was rejected by Gryffindor. I find it much more believable that Hagrid would have taken him in. There were a few parts that I cringed at, but good job over all! :)
person Lady Allylandra
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was absolutly fantastic. I loved every part of it and would love you to write a sequel. Though a little depressing i love the way the charcters interacted and i honestly think that most of what you said about Dumbledore, Fudge and ron is correct. And thanks for remembering the torture in the 5th book. A lot of people glance over that one but you didn\'t. Cheers for a great read
person Noir Black
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually care for fics where Harry changes his name . . . but you made it very believable and waited until the end to call him by his new identity for good. I had wanted to read about Harry and Snape not \'Who ever\' and Snape.

Also the \'almost\' rape scenes were at least tasteful.

I can say that I found it sweet and very believable. It was an enjoyable read. I\'m very glad I took the time to read it.