rate_review Reviews

I would play up the spoof factor slightly more. But it was quite amusing

Unbelievably bad. Was this a serious attempt at a story?

If this WAS a serious attempt at a story, please consider taking up gardening or knitting instead. Thanks.

THAT. WAS. PATHETIC! YOU CALL YOURSELF AN AUTHOR??? I WAS BETTER IN 3RD GRADE! Want my advice?? Details! The more details, the better the story! Details help readers to visualize this stupid story better. GRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

OMG! AND THAT TITLE! Ron did NOT save teh day! Harry did! He killed Voldemort, NOT Ron! He got the letter! NOT Ron! FUCKING LEARN HOW TO WRITE STORIES WUD YA?!?!?!?!? I HATE DEALING WITH DUMB ASS PHONIES LIKE U! GAH! (wow... first reviewer... hope evury1 else realizez how much it sucked 2!) seriously, i could write better than u did. i\'m a 13 yr old pervert, and i publish for about 3 different sites. and mine ROCK. -grumbling sounding like \' stupid fucking amateurs\'-

oh, and did i mention how quick it was?? WAY 2 SHORT!! u totally took a good idea, and killed it. it could\'ve been soooooooo much better! u cud\'ve made this story last for atleast 4 chapters! *oh god do i feel like i need to hit something!* wait a second... r u considering this rape or life preservation? i can\'t really decide, but i would have made the death eaters rape her, then go through the thing where she doesn\'t want to be touched.... then after a while she and ron could hook up. -grumbling again- fucking amateurs... -gets idea- I KNOW! I\'LL WRITE MY OWN VERSION!!!!!!!! -opens notebook and starts mapping out story plan excitedly- this is going to be so much fun!!!! yay!!! -looks back to the so-called, ahem, \"author\"- i welcome your critisism after its published! -smirk- it\'ll be done in a few days, i\'m quite busy with all the homework (4 different projects, an english report, and an algebra sheet)