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for Call On Me

by Emma8381

person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Master Of the Poke World
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope u dont mind me askin but will James and Lily be alive becuz of U no who???
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This better not be the end.....Or else (a wolf snare)grrrrrr
person Brittany
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, continue the story its abusolutely amazing!!! I love it... I love remus fanfics!
person Alauralen
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!! I just finished the first chapter and that was good, a unique idea so far!! Can\'t wait to read more!! Great job with the writting!! So many questions!!! Very nice beginning!

Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh was there something in the drink that made Sirius go all postal? I am lovin\' the story!! Can\'t wait for more! Try to put your paragraphs a little further apart, the first chapter was fine, but the second was a little hard to keep track of. Other than that, I think you are doing a kick ass job!! Keep up the good work!!

Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Caitlin!! McGonagall and Dumbledore should have let Sirius and James kill that bastard!!!! I like how she responds to Remus though...Remus, yummy werewolf*daydreams for a second before getting back to review* Where was I? Oh yes, Caitlin, I hope that her friends are able to help her through this ordeal and that Sam gets his!! Was the same thing wrong with Sam that had been wrong with Sirius? Or is he just your run-of-the-mill Slytherin jackass? Urg! I wish I had time to read the rest of the chapters now, but I don\'t!!! You definitely have my interest though!! Great work and I so can not wait to read the rest later!!

Alauralen
person Master Of The Poke World
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww aint that sweet,They finally made oove to each other
person gossamer_wings
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! u have me on the edge of my seat here and im only on chapter 5! loving it! keep up the good work! -x-
person Sea
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The more I read, the more I liked this story. Well done.