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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Exellent new chapter, best yet. Glad your updating again, look forward to the next chapter. Will you be updating your other stories?
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's been a while. Glad to see that you are still continuing with this story. I'm also glad that Ginny's first time was with Harry and not one of her brothers. I can't wait to read more about the goings on between these two especially now that Harry remembers this time. ;)
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot story man, the new chapter is great ive been waiting for it for awhile, are you planning on updating any of your other storys?
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't see much wrong with your tenses or grammar...I can't wait for the next installment..
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOT a big fan of Ginny getting excited at the idea of her brothers having sex with her....And ESPECIALLY not a big fan of her tasting their cum. EEE-YUCK.
I actually like this fic, and think it's an interesting premise you've got going for a story, but my humble suggestion is to move away from the family incest thing and get back to Harry and maybe even Draco...anyone other than Ginny dreaming about doing her brothers...
Ah well, to each his own.
And, there are grammar and spelling errors all over the place here. Perhaps you should get a beta to review this before you post.
Good luck!
I actually like this fic, and think it's an interesting premise you've got going for a story, but my humble suggestion is to move away from the family incest thing and get back to Harry and maybe even Draco...anyone other than Ginny dreaming about doing her brothers...
Ah well, to each his own.
And, there are grammar and spelling errors all over the place here. Perhaps you should get a beta to review this before you post.
Good luck!
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well it was short but well written, i look forward to your next installment hopefully it will be longer and less of a wait
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March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grate werk. Please write more!!!!!!!!
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story can't wait for more
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, can't wait to see what's next
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!