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for A White Coat For My Blond

by scyllablue

person NightOwl
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I love your story! Your idea about coats reminds me some fairy-tales, where usually is a mother-witch, her child with a coat allowing him to turn into some animal... and then there is a person in love with child, that person usualy stole coat and destroy it... I suppose you know well this kind of tales (I like them much).
Your combination veela/coat/animal-form is special and nice. And your way of their relationship is constantly wonderful!
person yoblossom
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? Never expected what?! you can\'t just leave it there!! You have to write more!! Please!!
person Rachel
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? what? Expect what?
person CassandraMalfoy
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
Awwwwwwwwww....they shagged happily.
*CHEERS*
Update again asap please.
person pimpshit
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and update!! I SOoooooOOOOOoooo cant wait for the next new chappy!....p.s. this is so hot!
person tessa3
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* can i have that.. can i have tha tlittle place in teh world where i don\'t have to invote noone in, have enough provisions until i die.. and just laze about? cani have that with the bonus for someone to love me?? *sniffs* yeah..that would be nice
person KC
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the coolest most awesomest story ever!!! And that\'s not just the sugar talking! I love the entire plot and can\'t wait to see what happenes next. Can you explain this coat thing a little bit for me? Are they regular coatts? Do they come when your born or with pubertie? What does the coat control? I am probably the only person who dosen\'t get it. Anyway, I can\'t wait to know what will happen, will Lucius open up? Will Harry and Lucius share there bad times? Is it time for a family get together? Please continue soon!! I\'ll be loyal and check everyday for a new chapter!!!
person Maurynna
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love what you have so far. Please update soon.
person tessa3
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah... its been a while since i have seen this fic.. i am glad i went back hunting for it. Its sweet *sighs* but i too would like to now more about Lucius *nodding* on to the next chapter and then my over all review, no?
person jamie
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nother good chapter can\'t wait to read more