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for A White Coat For My Blond

by scyllablue

person ice owl
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just don\'t deage my Snape. He is perfect the way he is. Quite a marvellous twist there.
person Lucius sikilmituile
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I like it very much, it\'s wonderful ........ in al aspects and
I want : MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person dmalfoy
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The stairs scene was my favorite too. Great chap.
person miyuki
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fascinating story with a unique blend of twists and turns. Strating from Lucuis recovery to the mating I couldn\'t put it down and read over three times. I have question though, is there a possibly of this fic being an M-preg one? Cause there is no mantion of it in the sumaary however you did mention Bill\'s pregnancy. that\'s what left me wondering if there is a possible of Lucuis getting pregnant and stuff. By the way I symphathize with ron, poor thing, hope Draco doesn\'t find his true mate and run away from him. Anyway you\'re a great writer and I hope you shall continue on with this lovely fic. I am certainly looking forward to more of it.
person Narcissa Black
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I was moved to tears by the scene at the end. Lucius may be gaining a second chance, but he is losing a lifetime with his son. I am not sure that is a trade that I would make. Please let the scene where Lucius remembers Draco\'s smell be an honest forshadowing of their bond. I assume that he still gets to remember Harry, since he is his bonded? Damn, all weekend writers on this site have been hitting my hotspots.
person Aisling
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh more soon cya xxx
person Chiaki Dark
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee!! A younger Lucius? How interesting. A bit sad that he\'s going to regress, but I do like the fact that you put the pensieve in there. And yes-Draco and Lucius were very very pretty together.

But, oh! Poor Ron! I don\'t think anyone can shake of insecurity in a relationship-but in the context of this story, it is harder to deal with-what with the mated soulmates and all. *sniffs* I hope something happens to erase Ron\'s fears. C\'mon Draco!! *shakes fist into the air in encouragment*

It was lovely-but please, may I have some more? ;]
person Chiaki Dark
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Cliffhangers-love \'em, hate \'em-you still have to deal with them! Good gosh woman! You\'re a wonderful, sadistic author!

Bring on the Draco and Ron, bring on whatever it is that Harry did not expect, but pleasepleaseplease bring it soon. :]

Lovely. I really love your Veelas.
person Lucius sikilmituile
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please, and soon if possible!!!!!!!!
person Missi
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius is losing his mind!! I love this fic, thanks so much for updating, I can\'t wait for more!!