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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
something is wrong with the chapter 1. It cuts off at the end of almost all of the paragraphs.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To bad most of Chapter 1 was missing. It would have been good to rea all of it.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic love the Weasleys betrayal and how he dealt with it cannot wait for next chapter
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post the next chapter as soon as you\'re able to
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, if brief, start.
Interesting list of warnings you\'ve got in the summary. O_O
More soon, please.
Interesting list of warnings you\'ve got in the summary. O_O
More soon, please.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
go on and harry and hermione would be cool
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! I love the evil weasley thing and love the Hermione saving Harry. And Lupin is awesome. I\'m looking forward to more chapters. And if you wanted to... I\'d love to see an epilogue or sequel to the Sisters Black. Pretty please?
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a little quick blurb. I hope you don\'t take too long to have a full chapter.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O hell yeah, this is great, I think I can see your style improving all the more with each chapter, and story.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Be sure to put in your disclaimers so your story is not removed. Interesting beginning, look forward to more.