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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:
Wow o_o
That chapter was beyond kick-ass-rugged, it actually _defies_ my favorite adjective. A bit on the extreme side, but what fun would it be if it were vanilla, eh? Seriously man, get the next chapter out soon. I can barely contain myself.
-Sahaqiel
Wow o_o
That chapter was beyond kick-ass-rugged, it actually _defies_ my favorite adjective. A bit on the extreme side, but what fun would it be if it were vanilla, eh? Seriously man, get the next chapter out soon. I can barely contain myself.
-Sahaqiel
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...... really.... wow..
i hope you lat ginny hang just a little next time harry use her. maybe in front of molly just to get in the \"mood
i hope you lat ginny hang just a little next time harry use her. maybe in front of molly just to get in the \"mood
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes revenge is always sweet! but you make it even lemony! lol cant wait for future updates cause it cant end like this can it???
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1
Okay, first off, I like that the prologue was a mite misleading in what the facts were. It shows that Harry (most likely) has learned to use the media to spin the story as he sees fit. I also liked the bit of foreshadowing with the tale starting with Katie Bell
Okay, first off, I like that the prologue was a mite misleading in what the facts were. It shows that Harry (most likely) has learned to use the media to spin the story as he sees fit. I also liked the bit of foreshadowing with the tale starting with Katie Bell
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
About 5 to 10 percent of the text for this chapter is hidden behind the right margin. What I could read has led me to believe that I will enjoy this story just as much as Sisters Black, but I\'d like to be able to read ALL of it. Please, do whatever you can to fix this problem.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Its James Benfield (FrozenOnyxPhoenix on ff.net and killercock on this site.) I\'ve enjoyed your stories for a long while, starting with sisters black. I only just noticed that you have my story in your recomended reading. I was happy to say the least! I hope you dont take the story seriously, as I meant it as just a bit of fun. I may be updating soon, though I have no idea who to have him with next, any response from you would be helpful! If you have any ideas, email me at jamesbenfield726@yahoo.com. Thanks and keep up the great work.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the start of this, I liked HP&SistersBlack but think that this story, hopefully much more dark and invloving Ginny!Torture will be even better. Keep going.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I rather dislike rape, the way in which you are taking your story is really well written. I loved your Sister\'s Black story, and I look forward to reading this story.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay,
This is good. I want to see where Hermione comes in on this, how will she react to Harry binding Ginny? And why would Moldy be so stupid to regen on the agreement?
This is good. I want to see where Hermione comes in on this, how will she react to Harry binding Ginny? And why would Moldy be so stupid to regen on the agreement?
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Thast awesome! I can\'t wait until the next chapter! What are you going to do to Snape? I can imagine what will happen to Belle and Peter.