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for Harry Potter\'s Rise to Power

by oldwolf

schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know that you haven't written in a long time. but this is still a great story. The Sisters black is still one of the best stores ever written. This is to, even better if you kept it going. We miss your input.
person noylj
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You wrote: Once Harry returns, Remus says,
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, i hope to see more of this soon!
person Backdoor Bandits.
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We know where you live. We're coming to rape you up your repressed gay ass with a donkey dildo.
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok i 1st want to say i like this story alot cant wait for a update but as i and others have said i dont think the charecter change in harry and hermione is good for the story
it was at 1st harry just wanting his friend back now hes really power hungrey and treats her like a slave more then a friend and where are her parents in all this and what is harry going to do when he goes back to hogwarts hermione never graduated nither did pansy and is ginny going back or harry whats going to happen when a bunch of harrys sex slaves are in school

ok back to the main subject you need to change things back so harry starts acting like a friend to hermione again and remember what hes doing almost like what ron did to her
person horny lit student
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just had a thought: Harry is attacked in public despite the presence of his bodyguards (Tonks, Remus, and two or three other werewolves). During the attack, all of the assassins are killed, but Remus is as well. Tonks, extremely distraught and thinking she has little left to live for, asks or demands that Harry use the binding spell on her. The possibility of her inclusion into Harry's harem, as well as several scenarios that could cause it to come about have been shooting around my brain for a few weeks, and the one I described seems more probable than the others, but I'm sure that if you were planning to do it, you'd probably be a bit more creative than me.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story so far. I did find the way that Harry threated Hermione to be out of line with the rest of the story. While i think the way he treats Ginny and the rest of his "wives" is believable with the way you've written the story the way Harry treats Hermione doens't seem to fit with the previous chapters. Up to Chapter 4, she was always first and foremost his friend. Even when he disiciplined her in chapter 3 even when punishing Hermione Harry doesn't treat anywhere nearly as roughly as his other slaves. Hopefully this hasn't come across as a flame because like i said i really did like the story. :) Keep up the great work and hope to read more soon.
person Lady Foxfire
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My brain has turned into Swiss cheese... has anything happen to Draco yet?
person Sean
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for your next chapter, please post more as soon as you are able to. Also, please try to keep up the good work
person Saber
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I hope you update soon. I wonder who the other brides he chooses will be? Update soon.