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for Love or Lust?

by RAB

person ???
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These reviews are funny!I have read all of them!Maybe you should publish your reviews they make a good read!
person Skylar
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think they are fighting about fucking are something???
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Sky for telling me I was very confused by the reviews and what the fighting was about.
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am very sorry RAB in all the confusion i forgot to tell i like this story so far. Are you looking for a beta I can help you if you want. My email is in my profile update soon.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe it\'s important that you get this beta\'d as soon as possible.
person Fangirl
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time I see the name Anon on a review it makes me want to puke!
You just keep writing honey and do not listen to most of these retards!
If you do not have something nice to say then move on!
It really shows what kind of people they are in real life.(People I would not want to know!)
Anyways,I think your story is really good and I liked what you wrote on the review page.
If you can take what these bastards have to say and not complain...your a better person than me!

xoxoHugs & Kisses xoxo
Fangirl
person anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need a beta.
person FairyHermione
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with Sam and say that most of you people really need to get a life!Most of you telling this person that they need a Beta can\'t even spell or use caps!I love the story and can not wait for you to write more!!!
person RAB
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you everyone for your honesty!I would like a Beta to go over my work,but after I complete the story.Other than the mistakes I made I do hope everyone has at least enjoyed the plot!Im going to try to add another chapter soon,but sometimes my work gets in the way.I will add to the story as soon as I can!
person Kris
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naive Hermione... nice... Cant wait for the next chapter!