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I understand what your saying Irene but actually Snape/Hermione fan fiction is when they are the main character\'s and im not trying to be rude either Im just stating a fact!You can not have a good Snape/Hermione fan fic without a good plot and I think the author is making good use of it.If the only people that were in this story was Severus and Hermione and there were no plot twists it would get boring real quick.The only time I like to see a Snape/Hermione fic with only them as the characters is when its a *One shot/smut fic!And if you don\'t want to read it anymore then DON\'T because for someone who is not trying to be rude you really could have kept that to yourself.I love your story author and im just letting you know that this is defently a good Snape/Hermione fic.You kind of need a Beta but you already seem to know that!Your plot is really good and I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

P.S:Sorry for the long review but I had to say what I was thinking.Oh and to everyone else who was rude on this review...all I have to say is GET A LIFE!!!:)

Snape&Hermione fiction is where they are the main characters I have to agree.I have read tons of fan fics that where Snape and Hermione that had them killing one another and shit.They don\'t have to end up together but Im sure that is what most of you fan girls want!Why don\'t you just write your own fic abou them?Liked the story by the by.

I hope you will update soon!
This will be very interesting. It will be fun to see how Hermione deals with the situation.
Will there be a happy end? Pleeeeaaaase!!!

Sandra

i do not see this as a hermione and severus story. you have him fucking another woman. the hermione/snape section should only be for stories that have hermione and severus having sex with each and other not other people.

I don`t think you have made that many mistakes. But if you would like a Beta mail me.

Sandra

Anon you are so stupid!Snape/Hermione fiction means that they are both main character\'s in the story!It can have sex,romance,dueling and anything like that in it!It does not have to have sex in it that is why the author put O for other!You are such a noob!Learn your fiction or don\'t post!!!

I actually think your grammar is quite astute and I can not wait until you update!
I don\'t think you need a beta...there just jealous of your talent.
You get alot of stupid people reviewing on these sights!

From Lovealot!

Hey, I just couldn\'t finish because of all the punctuation and spelling errors. I read about half before I realized I had no clue what was going all due to reading around all of the mistakes. If you need help, I would be more than happy to beta for you. I myself just started writing recently and know from experience that no matter how good you are, you always need help. Email me and let me know if you need any assistance.

Jenny

The author never exactly said that Snape was fucking the other girl?I mean they are\'nt married so how do you know if they are or not?And yes,Snape/Hermione fiction can be about anything as long as they are the main characters!

So, Hermione is knocked up? Does she loose the baby - is that what the pain is? Will she tell Snape? Or does he over hear someone\'s conversation about \"Poor Hermione all alone\"? If not that, What could it be???