rate_review Reviews

Hey author are you a girl or a boy?::Blushes::....I liked your story...and I like you!

Sethy are you hitting on the author? !!!
...I just want you to know if Snape ends up shagging her in detention?

I think I know, I think I know!!!

Keep going, I`m really interested.

Sandra

Good story so far. My problem is that while I think it is a good story, it\'s true that the spelling and punctuation errors distract from it. A lot. My advice would be to have a beta go over each chapter before you post it. Maybe flesh out the conversations a bit more.

I have the feeling that Snape is NOT having sex with Bella, there\'s something going on that we aren\'t privy to yet, and he still wants Hermione. I hope she realizes she\'d be using Ron if she goes further with him. Maybe it\'s previous stories but it feels like she\'s getting with her brother when she kisses Ron! So to those who are bitching that this isn\'t a Snape/Hermione story- get over it. A lot of fics start out w/ them apart and even with other people first. (*gasp!*)

Don\'t be discouraged but consider beta-ing before you\'re finished with the entire story.

Oh my god!This fan fiction is soooo good!I can not wait for you to write another chapter!I really like the twists and turns and the questions at the bottom.Nice touch!:)

Hello I just want to let you know my offer still stands if you want a beta. And good chapter

Yes,HermioneandSeverousfan I will call upon you to be my Beta after I have finished all of the chapters.Thanks for the review!

Can I be your Beta!!!I love your story!!!xoxoxo

Will Ron or Harry ever find out that she\'s pregnant?Im interested to see what is going to happen!

Why is it that everyone who reads a story and likes it feels the need to write something mean about a person who is less enthused about that story?? The whole point of reviewing is to post ur opinion. So anyone telling other people to shut up, Needs to shut up, it just makes you sound like the idiot you are. I agree with Anon, and anyone saying \"She has perfect grammar...look at your own.\" i do recall that those very people were saying \"i beleave\" ...maybe you didn\'t know this but this is how you spell--> \"believe\". Anywho, this whole lets attack anyone who doesn\'t have the same opinion as me thing needs to stop, it\'s something we all have gone through in Elementry and should have left it there.
To the Author: I like you story, but I\'m hating the whole \"Hermoine/Ron\" so I don\'t believe i will continue reading it. I do believe you put this in the Hermoine/Snape category. And no Hermoine/Snape does not just mean that they are the main characters in the story, it means that they are the main couple in the story. And if you don\'t plan on having them end up together then don\'t put it in that category, its fairly simple.
Thank you.