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seriously, this writing really needs some work. I\'m guessing you\'re very young...

It\'s me your first reviewer!I am really enjoying your story and I cannot wait until you beta it so I can print it out and keep it with my other fan fiction that Im mast fond of!I Love Snapey!I Love Snapey!Keep adding until your finished!!!

Thanks for the fast update.
I am really fascinated by your storyline, it so much more originall than the most fics we see around here.
I am curius how this whole mess will work out. (and yes, the old romantic I am is hoping for a happy end, pleas?)

My offer to beta for you is still standing, you will find my email in my profile.

Sandra

Sorry for the spelling errors in the previus post. It is around 2:00 in the night in germany and I am really tired.

Sandra

That Bella woman is a bitch!I hope Snape and Hermione kick her ass!I love the story so far and im happy you update so quickly!

All I have to say is that I did not find it hard to read at all.Eveyone could use a beta but this is one of the better fan fics I have read in awhile.You know how to put words together and spell and you have a good plot to me that is the most important aspect of the story.I really love all of your chapters and I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Thank you for updating that fast. I am really enjoing your story.
The storyline is great and original.

Sandra

It isn\'t rude or mean or any such thing to point out, constructively, where the author could improve. Especially when it is their spelling and grammar, which is so painfully easy to correct and will be beneficial to the author in real life as well as here. Anyone who can\'t take such criticism has no business contributing. If this author wants people to read and enjoy the story then these issues to need to be addressed. I\'m afraid I only managed a few paragraphs before having to give up. From what these reviews say, I\'m sure your plot is great and I would certainly return to read it if you reposted the chapters you have so far with betad versions. I don\'t want to discourage you, by any means, keep writing and enjoy it!!

I\'m really cuious about what\'s going to happen . Will Hermione stay confused a very long time ? Will she tell Severus about her pregnancy ? And what about her friends ? Please update soon.

I thought everyone new that snape/hermione fiction was that they were the main characters?Are people that thick?