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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED THE STORY!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t mean to leave a flame, but that was mean,it had no happy ending, in the summary you are misleading, really you need to have a warning, a lot of stories had rape but not husband/wife. Wat was the point?
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omigod... so good! You should really write more to this... Snape can\'t be all alone!
*hugs Snape*
*hugs Snape*
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was very well done. and would like to see more, please.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can not picture severus raping a woman for the hell of it but I can absolutely picture him flying into a rage and not listening to any kind of reason and then doing something violent for sure.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was powerful. i actually cried. lol. i loved it. you should continue it just so we can find out if she goes back to him or not. it\'s cool if you dont. we can make up our own after life kinda story thing. yeah. anyways great story.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t like reading angst, but I was curious. You did a great job with the writing here, even though it was hard to read. I also believe that Snape would not do anything as you have just described here. Such a sad ending though, too bad he jumped to conclusions. I can understand her for leaving.
The romantic in my begs for maybe something more. An act of redemption on his part, forgiveness on hers. *gives puppy dog eyes*
But if you choose to leave it as this, it works well.
Again, nice work.
The romantic in my begs for maybe something more. An act of redemption on his part, forgiveness on hers. *gives puppy dog eyes*
But if you choose to leave it as this, it works well.
Again, nice work.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really don\'t understand how she actually could talk to him after that. She should\'ve just left as quickly as possible, not let him hug and kiss her after. I\'m a real fan of SS/HG, and the rape was a bit sad to read, but it was the fact that she actually was prepared to forgive him that really shocked me the most. That was very un-like Hermione. Otherwise, good plot.
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow thats amazing!
cant wait for you next update!
cant wait for you next update!
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ....man ... snape who are you going to win her back ..... please update soon i would like to read what will happen next ...
later for now
angel
later for now
angel