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for One Cold Morning

by Nyxx

person eh..
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly unreal? ....Doesn't sound like how they'd act together...what do I know though.
person Auburn
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Nyxx,

This is the first fanfic that I have read ever written by you. I think it's truly magnificient and I agree, Snape would never do such a thing. However, this story leaves me at a cliffhanger. I would love to know if you'll write more chapters to it or a sequel. If you do, feel free to email it to me. I would truly appreciate it.

Your fan,
Auburn
person Citten
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well.... what can i say i love hermione and severus stories so i am hopeing for the best and the ending to be somewhat of a soft romance, mostly because i am with you i don't think him capable of such a thing. Well here is to hopein' (lifts glass in slaute) :)
person Ronni
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome story..... the angst was unberable....

pllllleeeeaaassseee continue it!!!

i beg of you
person anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark and extremely sad. Pretty well-written, though both Hermione and Snape were OOC, but this is fanfic so you have artistic license to interpret them how you want. Either way, I'd love to see a sequel or more chapters of this!
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok your a
person Silky Sweet Satin
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ley me tell you that one of my favorite characters are SNape, Harry and Draco. I liked your story vut it did make me rethink him in some of my stories. they aren't on this site as of yet but they will be soon. It was good.
person auntbecky
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm with you about Severus. Something is going on that we don't know about yet. My feeling is that he told Albus about the Unbreakable Vow and Albus made him go through with it anyway. Still, you can never tell with JK. She can be a cold-hearted b#tch sometimes. Anyway, really liked your story.
person snapes_witch
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well-written one shot, don't think I could take more of this Snape! Thank goodness she left him; I was afraid she wouldn't.
person denise
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
serves him right! I was soooo pissed when he hurt her!! but anyway i love teh story it is great. I think you have the potential to be a GREAT writer! but i have one thing to complain about, dont stop with this as a one shot, continue it, i would really like it. you could write about her time away from severus, and his attempts to get her back and at teh end you can decide if she will ever come back or not.....think about it and remeber i would LOVE it if you wrote more!!!