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Dear Ms. WalrusMeat,
Your fic was soooooo hot. I got off on it in like 4.5 thrusts. My boyfriend was there, but he just sort of started blankly like he always does when I touch myself in front of him. You see he\'s not really sexually active due to the fact that I have nothing to penetrate him with. Well you see I kinda do, but it\'s like .00001 inches and the poor little knub can\'t seem to protrude its way inside my uke. I like to call it a \"fun size\" cock. My ukes don\'t seem to have much fun with it though...anyways I hope to see more wizard hotness for my fun sized cock to enjoy. By the way, WALRUSMEAT, I love your penname.

Oh my god, I absolutely love this story so far. please, please, please, update soon.

i <3 you

Just wanted to tell you that I love the first chapter can\'t wait to see where this is going to go....Please update soon with a much longer second chapter.....Please!!! :)

I think your story is off to a good start! You\'ve introduced us readers to the characters you\'re going to be using and also given us a bit of a cliffhanger with the is James and Sirius straight or not thing. The only critisism I have is that you should probably do a spell check on your chapters before posting, or if you don\'t have that-just re-read your chapter after you\'ve written it and you\'ll usually see your mistakes then. There really wasn\'t that many, so don\'t get discouraged or anything, but it would make the story look much better! Anyway, please update soon as I looovvveee Marauder stories, especially ones that have to do with James/Sirius!=D