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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. The boys got each other jewelry! Sooo need chapter 11!!!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Harry and draco bought each other the same necklace! Only opposites! Cute chapter!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow awesome fic. plz update as soon as possible
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this. It is sooo damn cute. "No. not Malfoy. Dwaco" Priceless. I had a feeling Draco would still be concious undernaeth. The only critisisms I have is that the chapters are too short and aometimes the story is moving along too fast. Other than that this story and your writing style are amazing. I would have loved to hear what Draco was thinking the first time his nappy was changed and also are we gonna see Sirius and Remus? Please? Anyhoo add me to your mailing list for updates if you have one...
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
I can so imagine a baby Draco. Awwww
Oh maybe when Draco and Harry get together Harry will become all clucky and want another baby to look after. 'hint hint'
noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
I can so imagine a baby Draco. Awwww
Oh maybe when Draco and Harry get together Harry will become all clucky and want another baby to look after. 'hint hint'
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you said that youd recently reposted this. thats good i love it!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heeee....Naughty Draco....nice chapter.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!! Soooo need chapter 9!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I abso - Positively- lutely Love this fic!!!
I keep coming back to read it every now and then! You have made my day!
Thank-you, Thank-you, Thank-you!!
I look forward to your next update!!
I keep coming back to read it every now and then! You have made my day!
Thank-you, Thank-you, Thank-you!!
I look forward to your next update!!
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is the first time I've noticed this story and I'm glad I did. I'm only at chapter 4 but I can already tell that it's quite different from the usual stories where one of the boys is turned into a baby. I think you're doing really well. I do have one little piece of criticism though. It's really wordy. Just check this out:
'adorable and handsome'
'opinion and point of view'
'gently and carefully'
'obviously and without a doubt'
'aware and informed'
'joy and pleasure'
'loathed and detested'
'safe and wise'
'rant and protests'
'wife and mate's'
Do you see the pattern? It seems like you're too indecisive to just pick and term so you stick in an 'and' and use both. Like all the time. These are just the examples off the top of my head from chapters 3-4. Synonyms give us a lovely variety of descriptive words to choose from. But I'd like to see you make a single choice. Saying both constantly gives the whole thing a sort of redundant air. Other than all the extra words, it flows well, the spelling and grammar are good and plot is working splendidly. You're doing a great job so keep it up! ^^
'adorable and handsome'
'opinion and point of view'
'gently and carefully'
'obviously and without a doubt'
'aware and informed'
'joy and pleasure'
'loathed and detested'
'safe and wise'
'rant and protests'
'wife and mate's'
Do you see the pattern? It seems like you're too indecisive to just pick and term so you stick in an 'and' and use both. Like all the time. These are just the examples off the top of my head from chapters 3-4. Synonyms give us a lovely variety of descriptive words to choose from. But I'd like to see you make a single choice. Saying both constantly gives the whole thing a sort of redundant air. Other than all the extra words, it flows well, the spelling and grammar are good and plot is working splendidly. You're doing a great job so keep it up! ^^
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dont know the reason you gave this up but id like more if possible please!!!!:)