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Yay! You updated- I have fallen in love with this story. I hate Ginny

PLEASE FINISH!!!!! the suspense is literally killing me. please hurry!

This story is brilliant- such an original plot line! I love how the plot has progressed and twisted leaving me surprised and wanting more. Your writing style is easy to enjoy and the characters are not out of character making the relationship progress between Harry and Draco feel natural... I loved the explanation of the Dragons and what Draco has to do- maybe you should start making the pregnacy more noticable- like morning sickness or dizzyness that would be noticed... I have a bad feeling that this whole Ginny and Harry thing will cause damage to Draco and the baby- maybe cause Harry to have to be told to save them both...

The twins make me smile- them both propositioning Draco was a great touch and having seen some jealousHarry made me grin insanly... it would be good to see somehting from their POV- I could imagine them maybe figuring out something is actually different with Draco before anyone else... Also Dobby and Kretcher was another good point- I like how they are helping Draco- maybe Draco has more power over the elves than people know because of his bonded status...

Having Moody and Snape as close confidants of Draco was good- maybe have Harry notice something more between Moddy and Draco- afterall Draco won't be able to do muggle fighting anymore in case it harms the baby... harry would no doubt be curious to what is going on there...

Poor Ron- I liked him in this because while he was still prejudice the fact he was trying to work on his flaws was a great touch- especially because he was doing it for Harry- I hope he wakes up- maybe you could have him wake once the baby is born- like a rush of magic that gives everything a boost... I also think that maybe Molly should get some more screentime...especially if Draco were to get used to her mothering him...or maybe find a way to get Narcissa involved...

I love how this have evolved and progressed- one of my favourite scenes was when Harry was all worried over the ill Malfoy... and also Ginny needs to get what is coming to her... Remus is another character that i would like to see more of- i hope he is okay...unless he has decided to hunt the hocruxes by himself...

I was also trying to think of a name suggestion for the baby- especially since the baby would probably have significant name since they are important- something to do with hope or light maybe...dragons even...but i couldn't think of one...you should try the website behindthename . com which will give a good background for names like this...

Please Update Soon! This story is fantastic!

ginny just needs to die lol >< oops she fell off her head...
still like the chapter fyi ;)

~eros

wow, just wow. this story is amazingly interesting!
i'm not sure how i've managed to miss this story up until now #_# but i'm really glad i found it!!!

i can't wait to see what happens next

Sorry, but I have to ask you thing: harry ejaculated in her vagina even if he was not himself? And get her pregnant? Because it would be hilarious. sorry again.

Someone stop her!!! I soooo need chapter 16!!! Draco won't understand or believe Harry!!!

Yay! An update!
As much as I dont mind the waits, it is a little hard, lol.
I really hope the thing Ginny was brewing wasnt a fertility potion. Oh my, I can just see all the drama and misunderstandings this will cause.

Can't wait for more!
SSS

I want u to know that ending was mean as fuck!!!!! lol does that mean that chapter 16 will be faster then cuz I am now readi to c wat happened and Ginny is pissin me off in this story cant wait to read more

This is a great story. I hope you have the time to continue this. I can't wait to see what happens.