rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I am definately intrigued... A very dark Snape in this fic, and that in itself is interesting, as most authors try to make him a bit more loveable. I am interested to see if Draco takes a genuine caring interest in Hermione. I am a big DM/HG shipper and love it when they get together consensually (at least by the end.) You have a fab start here, please continue.

ummmm....okay?
i think it has tons of potential. try not to get too much caught up in the style and forget your plot. it\'s interesting, and i liked it - just trying to help. i feel like you need to clarify it a little bit better.

good first chapter though.

Ummm.... wow, that was..... interesting....:D.

i am interested! update soon. but hey this is a draco hermione right, just wondering? :)

HMM....interesting, very ver interesting.....I like it ::evil smile while taping fingers together:; Good job on the start of the story it definitely grabbed my attention. Looking forward to reading more.

This is a very dark although not entirely improbable premise you\'re playing with. It has a great deal of potential, but I confess to finding this chapter a bit tough to read in terms of continuity. You might want to give your chapters a second read-through before you post, paying particular attention to tenses and quotation marks. It\'s very difficult to tell what is memory, what are his thoughts, and what is narrative through-line. Perhaps incorporating single quotation marks or italics to denote thoughts would be helpful.

In any event, good luck, and I hope that you continue to explore the sensationalism of a story about a serial rapist.

I love it! It\'s very twisted (mentally...as in not normal) but it has a unique aura that attracts me. Good job! Keep up the great work!