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Onway to read what going to happen, to see if Ginny is a see or not?

hej!

love your story very very much - but where is the last chapter?! can't wait to read it but i'm a bit sad that it'll be the last one.

yours, veronika

please update your story soon! i would like to know who the girl that draco may cheat with is!!

There is definitely a lot of Buffy in here. It reminds me of the whole "Death is your gift" thing. I really hope that you update soon. This is a very good story. I think comparing the first chapter to the last one, you can tell that your writing has gotten better, too.

That quote sounds like something I heard off of Dogma. I like this story, tis very good.

Seriously I had to read this over again. I can't think of what the case is. This last chapter had me wondering who was who. I know Ginny was Nef's gisselle ( i guess that's how you spell it), but I can't figure out whether Ginny lept from the girls body or not after she was cut as an animangus (I believe). And in both times that this scene is visited it never truly says that Nef is dead. Only that she's holding this girls hand (vice-versa). And it's weird that Draco seems to have the slightest bit of a six sence. You gotta wonder if he isn't feeling de-ja-vu as well. Since I'm assuming the next is your last chapter and this story is solid on it's own so don't surcome to the sequal bids. Just make the last a brilliant compelling piece.

This might be way off base, but is it possible that Ginny misinterpreted the vision and in fact it wasn't that the Draco look-a-like cheated, but that there where two children born from the relationship and while one stuck by her side the other reteated to her father and both betrayed Nef by the the sacrifices of war. I have an active imagination, but I wondered.

I am really enjoying this story - please have another chapter out soon!

Great chapter. I love your story! Great idea.

OH! most excellent ^^
though of course, me being the perve i am, was hoping for a little more ginny/draco to come into play
but i can wait!!
so far its been wicked! keep it up eh?