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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A bit short, but it was alright. There were also a few spelling errors, so the next time you write something you may want to use spell check. (No offense. That was pretty good, but you can improve. I'm just making suggestions.)
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... No... >_>;; Too rushed, too much changing point of veiw. If you write a story, stick to one point of veiw. If they\'re going to \"fuck\", give it more detail.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ginny knew to much about what she was doing for a virgin. That was your biggest mistake
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love Harry and Ginny together. It was a good concept for a story but I thought it could have been written slightly better.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that came out great!!! I knew it would be good!! Write different stories, ok? I will help when I can.