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by roxierose13

person Alison
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy! How's Draco going to take the news? This'll be good. hee hee =o)
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your work! I have read most of your stories, and I love them all. I started to fead them when I read the first chapter of "in to the closet". I don't know why I never bothered to review. I will from now on. You can add one more fan girl to your list. Yay!

One more thing I wanted to say. I have never read a story like this one. I really like it, being able to hear what other people sre thinking has its perks huh? I love the way you write Ron's thoughts. They seem so like him.
person venus
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u promise 2 update soon? can it PLEASE not be an entire week this time?!?!?!?! it takes forever for u too update!! and i check, like, every few hours to see what stories r updated!!! especially yours!!!! i wanna see how draco is gonna react!!!!!!! whats he gonna do/say????? TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person NebuNeferu
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dancing happily all over the room, YEAH!!! WOHOOO! He's so gonna tell Draco! YEAH!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!! And don't take too long since you've finish your other fic called "Into the Closet".
person GML
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeel* This detention is turning out better then I expected! *grin* If I wasn't afraid of being turned into Potions ingrediants, I'd hug Snapie right about now. *snicker* Poor Draco, D-Nile isn't just a river in Egypt. Great chap! More Please! ASAP!!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 13! Draco is going to be sooooo mad!
person Philomel
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, here comes a review for your amusement *g*
Lovely update, I truly like Harry's forwardness - very promising for the content of the next chapter. And the way Draco's thoughts contradict what he's saying is hilarious!

I don't want to be a nitpicker, but you might want to know that these big houses are called "manor" and are only pronounced like "manner".
person cara
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I. HATE. CLIFFHANGERS. !!!!!! but i love you =) please update soon
person Dreaming_Sensations
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol I love it when people think one thing and say another
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Urgh! Just wanna smack Draco. Good chapter. Write more soon. This is fic is a lot of fun. :)