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for Mind Games

by roxierose13

person Wouldn't You Like to Know?
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate you... ok, no. I worship the ground you walk on... You know what i mean, anyway, how could you leave a cliffhanger like that?!!! Great story though, you portray the characters' personalities perfectly given the circumstances. Love the way Harry's thoughts get all jumbled, kinda sounds like my head but with only four voices in it!
person Night
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im really a member on here but just to lazy to sign in lol but i love this story please update soon!!!!!! and it wasn't fair u left it at a big cliffy!!!!! ure so wrong!!!!!!!! now please update hehehehehe keep up the awesome job ^_^
person ookami-kun
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! This fanfaiction stuff is turning me into an insomniac(sp?). Is Malfoy going to give in or is he going to put Harry through hell first? And what is with his trust issues? He was even giving me a head ache. I'm surprise Harry didn't just reach out and strangle him (at leasat once). Anyway please con't you to update. I'm saving this to my fav's to keep track of it.
person emma
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love you and this fic!! it's so awesome (as was into the closet :])
great job! and i can't wait until the next chapter
goooood luck
although you obviously don't need it :D
person You Better NOT
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If Draco says something stupid like "I hate You", so help me, I will come through my laptop and punch you in the nuts. Even if you don't have any.
person Endless Waltz
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arg !!! How can you cut the chapter like this?! Write more!!
I love it ^_^

Endless Waltz
person venom_sama
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you just HAD to put a cliffy there!
right when it was getting good!
i could killl you if i didnt want you to continue this fic!
person Prongsmate
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur fic is actually the first that I read on adultfanfiction.net and I have to say that it's REALLY good. Although the idea of Harry reading minds is not entirely new to me, as I read another story, where Harry and Draco could read each other's thoughts because they were meant to be together (or something like that...it was a long time ago...which makes me think that I should probably read it again), I really like the way you write Harry, Hermione, Ron and Draco's characters. Your story is really funny, especially in the first chapters where Ron was (and still is) absolutely obsessed by food...I also like the way you write Harry's thoughts...They are really fun to read and just really entertaining! thANKS for sharing this with us and hopefully, you'll post a new chapter in a matter of days...or weeks!
person Amessis
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
He says yes, right?!
person kumori
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you updated. happyness. i really like this story. i can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.