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for Mind Games

by roxierose13

person Submissive Minx
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is to funny!!! Please update soon.
person anjellic
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please update again soon! I wasn\'t sure if i was going to like it but I am....I love the commentaries!
person Sarkywoman
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s complicated, but readable. I like the way that Malfoy thought \'he\'s looking at me! look away!\' or something of that nature.
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too too wonderful! I can\'t wait for chapter 3!
person Teran
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the thoughts and reactions Harry is having. It would be a bit difficult to concentrate with thoughts bombarding you, esepcially hot sweaty thoughts from a cool Malfoy. Great work, easily understandable.
person sarah
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW

Definetly funny. you would think that Ron would at least have normal thinks running through his brain but no. Your right i can see him with food on his mind all day. hehe

Great start please keep it up.

Please email me when oyu update

Cheers
person venus
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon???????????????????????????????????????????? (i WILL beg if i have to!)
person EbOnY-LyCaN14
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! This story is incredible!!! I read the title and decided to investigate a little :P. Very good story you got here, and it is easy to understand what\'s going on. Plaese continue soon.....Pweassssseeee???? I will be wating patiently..... well, i will be waiting anyway, lol!! XD
person RCJ
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* ok, keep writting, it\'s really good! XD
person ice owl
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m bloody well impressed with myself...I followed the whole thing and knew who was talking!