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by roxierose13

person Crowley
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARRRRGGHHHHHH! You can't just leave it there! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I must know what happens with Harry and Draco! Must read some sexy boy love! heheheh. I love your story, and i find a lot of the thoughts are completely hilarious. Especially Ron's. *giggles hysterically* I probably sound like a little obnoxious fangirl.....er....fanguy....But that's okay!
You know, i find it odd, but my ex-boyfriend Ben didn't like to read slash. Heheh...i like it. He would get all jealous and say, "I should be the only guy you like! Grrrrrrrr! Me a big controlling cave-man!" lol. Sorry. It's really late, and i'm really tired, and when i'm really tired, i get really giddy. I think i get it from my mother. ANYWAYs, update soon, hear ye! Please! *gets down on knees and begs*. I'll love you forever.
~ Draven Wolfe, (Crowley on AFF)
person angelstarfire
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Arg... I want to see what happens between Draco and Harry... Opportunity knocks again!
person erotic*chaos
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! it's over! more of a filler ch. but i cant wait for the next! hurry plz!
person Drake
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I NEED I NEED!!!! I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! PLEEEEASE!!!
person LadyJane
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Absolutely great how you write the inner thoughts of them all, very convincing and deadly funny at the same time. LOVE IT!
person Philomel
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're back! More funny and weird thought interaction *bounces of joy*
Still love your style and the idea. Though I wonder why Harry doesn't pay attention at all>/i> in classes. Hermione could help him a bit more, in my opinion, at least repeat the question for him. Draco was very sweet in the Hospital Wing. And I so want to read about the detention!!
person Drake
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THIS IS HOT!!! I NEEEED CHAPTER 10!!!! PLEEEEEASE!!! *begs*
person cara
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter!! I cant wait till detention time! yay :]]
person blood water
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!! please keep going!!
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mental diarrhea! I love it... laughed my arse off!



And congratulations, by the way, on staying so perfectly in POV for the most part. I think there was only a couple of places throughout the entire part I read (not to include the dream sequence), that had a spot that looked out of view.