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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...Harry's changes make more since now and I can understand where he is coming from. I am amazed that nothing was done to Ron & Hermionie for hurting Luna and Draco in the Owlery. Sure hope Ron "gets his" from trying to kill Draco this time. I want the whole pack to live together...I am a sucker for happy endings...so sue me! *giggles Can't wait to read more. If you have an "alert" list, please add me to it. Thanks. :)
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read the review from D/H. Ignore that person. I put it this way...if you want to read professional writings, go to BooksaMillion and buy something. If you want to read just for fun and different veiw points, go to FanFictions. FanFiction sites ARE NOT for professional writers, even though some do add their works here. Practice makes perfect...so keep up the hard work. :)
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin the Greek God names
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for another update.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I skimmed through the first few chapters and i have to say, your dialogue is horrible and very amatuerish
and very unsophisticated..
You write for fun but couldn't you at least TRY to make the character's dialogue a little
more believable and time/era related..I can't read this story of yours..It's just
toooo bad!!
Sorry to say..
and very unsophisticated..
You write for fun but couldn't you at least TRY to make the character's dialogue a little
more believable and time/era related..I can't read this story of yours..It's just
toooo bad!!
Sorry to say..
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a nice story i love the twist but come on urinating that just gross,and why is Ron being such a prat i would like you to kill him off please.maybe be harry,draco or even hermione couls kill Ron.Hang on make sure hermione kills Ron pleeaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are so mean leaving me hanging like that. Oh, I really hope that Ron gets what's coming to him and Luscius ( did I spell that right?) gets his ass kicked!!!!!!!!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Brillant Story and I would love to read the rest if they are available
Brillant Story and I would love to read the rest if they are available
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far, but I think Harry should stop calling Remus "Lupin" all the time, after all you have the man as his new godfather. It's not like Harry running around saying "Malfoy" all the time. Remus and Harry's relationship is like adopted father/son so the last name thing isn't working for me.
But I do like the story so far.
But I do like the story so far.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... well, I just want to point out that Harry has two phoenixes, but still hasn't figured out that he can travel instantaneously by fire. On the other hand, kudos for the suspense. Oh, and pleeeeease dom!Harry, please, please, pleeeeease!!!
~Hazel
~Hazel