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Well done! Loved the encounter with Draco. As for your beta question- they like proof read what you\'ve written, help double check for spelling or grammar errors, that kind of stuff. But, I think you\'re doing well.

Aw, you got him a phoenix, how sweet! Haha, and Draco has no idea what hit him! That\'s gonna be fun...hahah!! ^_^

Having just finishing reading Indigo Reborn, it has clearly shown that the constant pursuit of reviews are as unnecessary as I have been telling everyone. She has more reviews then she can shake a stick at. In fact, I dont believe she even asks for them, the story is just so original and written clearly as to what everyone thinks and feels that you feel like you are right in the story it self and it, as a reader doesn\'t get any better then that. Thats why I try to get the authors to downplay the chat room kind of repetitive reviews that hale the author beyond the importance of the story. The author affection that the reviewers feel grow naturally because of the excitement of the story. Some writers will perhaps not ever achieve this ability to write, but other then really putting ego aside and seeing the way a story that is well written could perhaps teach in it self. I see an open mindedness in you that tells me that there is room for exciting growth and I will keep my eyes open for your further works. I also admire you in dropping words that are detracting from your story if you see that it is not working and that shows sacrafice for betterment of your story. Good for you.

You\'re doing a great job. Can\'t wait to see more of Draco....Lots more.

I see that you have asked about what a beta reader is? It is a person who will check you spelling, and other aspects of your writing to see if it is up to snuff. I would also suggests that people proof-read their work. You may already know what that means but in case you do not it is one who checks their own work after writing. I always proof-read, and I am gifted with good spelling, not perfect because of not useing as much since I dont write as I use to. If you dont use it , you do loose it and I still find commas missing or not likeing the way I worded something. Or mentioning a word, like story too many times in a short spanse of writing. I wouldnt think of writing something without checking it, for want of not looking more foolish than I already do. Having finished writing this you would be surprised how many things that I have gone back and reworded and found things missing, it truly is a great first tool to good writing. In the meantime I find that you dont have a lot of errors but its always nice to have someones elses perspective on your writing if it means that much to you. I think your story is going to be good for sure, perhaps not great. That isn\'t always easy because of looking for an original writing direction that hasn\'t already been well explored already. It is one of the major reasons that I dont ever write a story myself. I wish you well. The doctor.

Having just read my review to you I see even after I have proof-read my writing to you I still managed to miss an r in your, see even I could use a beta. Ha ha.

Yes, more!!!

I still feel a little weird cause Harry calles his godfather just \"Lupin\" and not \"Remus\". But maby it\'s just me... O.o
Oh God, Harry\'s new attitude is fantastic! I just love it, you know... *smirk* Wouldn\'t mind having him on my side...
Draco is such a bottom right now! I hope you\'ll keep up like this. Harry\'s comment was brilliant! <3
No! No amnesia, not ever! Harry will remember Draco! I mean, who could forget about that gorgeus ass of his... XD

No, no amnesia! Harry will remember Draco, for ever! I mean, who could forget that piece off ass... XD

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 7! The chase is on!

I love it Heres some more to use Neville[sp] ,Dumdler[sp] ewww old :shiver: Pansy and ubmridge[sp]
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THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!