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for Lady Marmalade

by hermywon

person SlashKat
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like this story. It was teenage and repeatative-did you really need a happily ever after reunion of all the inevitable couples at the end? It started well, but it got boring.
person Amy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story :)
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always wondered where that song came from. Anyway, pretty decent story. Fairly good job at keeping everybody in character.
~The Flame Reviews~
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just read your other reviews. I have read thousands of fanfics and rarely review any of them. I can count on one hand the number of times I have said a story was brilliant. If I say your story is decent then it is. Trust me, I am VERY hard to please.
~The Flame Reviews~
P.S. Please forgive the excessive use of "I".
person [oyu[79g[
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT'S BY FAR THE DUMBEST STORY I AVE EVER EVER EVER READ! STUPID
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Terrible
person Mishra
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of the girls taking desperate measures, it really has flavour. I think you were the first with this idea, even though I disagree with your view of the relationship of men and women. We are equal now (or at least we should be), so why are we sticking to some oldfashioned roles of the active man and the passive woman? Because it is comfortable for the girls?

Well I don\'t want to start a discussion here, you\'ve written a very nice story. Only one question remains:
Why is Dumbledore alive?

Greetings
Mishra

PS: Maybe you want to have a look at my story as well :)