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for Drowning Lessons

by flameboi

person Liri
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is amazing, strong, positive. Thank you very much!
person Perception
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Besides the fact that its pornagraphic, it's almost prose. you have a Gorgeous and unique writting style. I've had the enjoyment of reading this story many times.
person Krazy
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was brilliantly written. I can't quite put my finger on it, but it's written differently than most fictions I read. Very well done with the pacing, and the slips of description in here and there. I love the touch of Severus dropping the empty vile. Awesome stuff. *smiles and nods*

*~* Krazy *~*
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm! I love this one! Everytime I read it I love it.
person XBasslineRaverX
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. That was just beautiful...I don\'t know what else to use to describe it. Simply beautiful.
person andie
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet and lovely and nice!