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for Awakening To the Dream

by ChimaeraChan

person Yocum1219
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just got to read all 56 chapters at once!! I'm on pins and needles waiting for more!! I'm off to find you at livejournal!! PLEEEEEASE let me know when you update!!!
person AngelStarFire
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that wasn't too confusing. ^^ I admit I was a little worried when I read your author's note, but I see my worries were unfounded... beautiful chapter! I enjoyed the bickering... and I am constantly amazed by your original characters... beautiful. :)

I remember seeing this story ages ago... it had something like five chapters at the time, and I refused to read it again until you had a buttload more... to that effect, I love the way you have changed and added to each and every branch of the plot... You've created real feeling, and I was incredibly torn when I read this chapter. This is brilliant work.

I would love to be put on an update list, if you wouldn't mind.

Thank you, and I hope to see more of this soon!
person Sologirl102
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEE! I love the dynamic between Harry and Draco. And I'm thinking that there is something between Blaise and Neville. *dancing wildly* UPDATE DAMN YOU!
person the simple minded nerds
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"you little slimmy peice of @!$@ How could you stop writing at that spot! Why i oughta come to where ever you live and cut out your thro..." *hand pushes hi down*

"Sorry about that. When my brother gets intrested in a story he gets a bit rowdy. i would first like to introduce us, we are "the simple minded nerds" aka DJ, me, and yes i'm a girl, BJ, the idiot who started yelling at the beginning(he's my brother but i reliquished my clame to him long ago) and last the boy who is no way related to us..."

"CJ at your service. now so you can finally stop wasting your time reading this and get back to writing the story. we would all just like to tell you that you have a wonderful story going on here. With the busload of info you cramed into this fanfic, the twists and turns, and the smooth transition of harry and draco turning from enimies to...well i don't know what you would call but what ever it is it has helped make this into one of the best fanfics we have ever read"

~the simple minded nerds
person Damien
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fred and george scene was HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
person Damien
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fred and george scene was HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
person clair3
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is seriously one of the best HP fic out there!
person Jan
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story, very detailed, if not a little confusing at the beginning but still really great. Can't wait till the next update. Hope it's soon^_^
person Tac
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I did it! I'm here! I'm getting so lazy about checking back for fics! I have to travel pages and pages back in time for what I've missed...
Well anyway! Irrelevant - Time for my review! Why oh why can't I ever find anything critical to say about your chapters? Probably because there's nothing to say. That settled, I have praises to sing! I still need to reread the rest of the fic to connect everything but everytime I click a new chapter I'm drawn back into the reality of your world. I started thinking during the dialogue between Oran and Kayne and Regan (sorry if I misspell, page is closed!) about how there seem to be so many layers to your story that other authors can't achieve. The other races are in that 'they're like humans, with their own problems and issues' place but their problems are more responsibility than mortal dramas yet just as normal. The way interactions are handled like the ideas between creatures and humans is so understandable and you just want to say 'yeah... but you're wrong!' like modern prejudices. *sigh* Hm I could teach a class on your story so far.. haha! That'll be.. right about after I finish that fanart! It'll get done, seriously, just working!
Wow, back on track... yes content. Musa was still ridiculously likable in this chapter, probably more so since he didn't have murderous intentions plaguing his mind. He seems dangerous in a childish sense - delicious! I also think it was a great time in the story to bring Seamus up; it's not too far after he was mentioned to be random and a solid change of pace after the Harry-and-Draco-drama (yes we love it!). I wish the other candidates didn't have to die.. I'm really liking Musa and that other chick even if she doesn't stand a chance up against the rest. (Sorry, at 3 am I'm gonna screw names.) But out of sheer loyalty not even Musa can have Harry - no Draco always wins! By the way - amazingly perceptive incentive to get me to churn out some art, promise me a day of Draco and I'll give you La Lune's head on a platter, dear.
The horribly scarring murder and blood and the wicked visual of snakes also made this chapter a quick read for me and very enjoyable- angst is your friend!
Good luck getting through this monster review, and much *insert confounded heart here* to you! Can't wait for another chapter!
For no other reason than it being 3 am and my insides goo from being sent this amazing picture(actually a site of them), here's a present! http://nodwickDOThumorDOTgamespyDOTcom/cats/flavourDOTjpg
person Omi desu~
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You mentioned me (I think it's me. How many Omi's are going to be spastically reviewing your fanfic?!) Loved the chapter, but I have to admit, I was mildly confused. Don't read to much into that; I'm quite easily confused XD