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for Awakening To the Dream

by ChimaeraChan

schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo you have so much written...i want it all! *begs and pleads*

This story is absolutely awesome. i love it
person momoko
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, I"m happy now and not whining as much. as soon as I reviewed the last the next chapter was up. I shall be happy with my little morsels until the next update.

person Amessis
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I loved poor Remus in this chapter.
person lashton
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not exactly certain what happened to get from point A to point B. I feel like there's a chapter missing. Draco Flooed to Grimmauld Place from the cottage in the woods? What chapter did Harry have his dream with Voldemort, MacNair and the "dragon" in? If Harry wakes up during his exritus when he'd in danger, why didn't he wake up when Vernon was beating him (is that right?)? I'm a little shaky about the details of what happened on Privet Drive. Were the Domin there? Are they the ones that Yehl fought? What's going on with the Order. They seem to be unusually/exceedingly inept. I understand some of what it means to be sealed, but will you go into more detail about that later? I'm not entirely sure I followed everything that was happening at Grimmauld Place.

In any case, I'm looking forward to more.
person claire
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOu did well on this chap!
person Sataline Estelle
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. This fic is AMAZING. YOU MUST ADD TO IT!! I want Harry and Draco to remember everything! I want to learn more about their new forms! I want them to shag! Please, please, please add more!! <3333
person Answers
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! the way Harry ripped his leg so effortlessly-bloody brilliant! And the way he comforted Draco after, was so real and the thought of Draco wearing Harrys shirt is so cute! Cant you just imagine it drapped down to mid thigh, falling of one shoulder.... And you have to describe Harry fully in the next chapter! He sounds hot. Love your work, please update soon!
person cyn
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another amazing chapter. so glad i stayed awake to read it tonight!
person chem chick
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. You have a great way of describing everything, and such an original story, with attention to details...May I take this time to tell you how much I love you to pieces??? Please write more! Thank you for such a wonderful story that makes my day everytime I see a new chapter!