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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1 of the best HP fics I've ever read! Will Harry& Draco find out about each other soon?
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your to modest, this story is more then an attempt at writing, it's a bloody masterpeice. For example most people would have said that he just didn't werewolfs but he had to act like that. Instead you made up a beleivable intresting explamation to that issue. Your a really great writer who thinks out side of the box, dont put your self down for less.
I love the Harry and Draco bonding time as friends, even though you can feel the very mild sexual tenion. It's good fun reading and a way to explain certain things and establish a freindlier relationship. I was just curious as to how far Mcnair got in attacking draco? I dont think it was very far because he's not dwelling on it too much, but i'd like to know. And how does Harry feel about it.
please update soon, although i know you will.
Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!
I love the Harry and Draco bonding time as friends, even though you can feel the very mild sexual tenion. It's good fun reading and a way to explain certain things and establish a freindlier relationship. I was just curious as to how far Mcnair got in attacking draco? I dont think it was very far because he's not dwelling on it too much, but i'd like to know. And how does Harry feel about it.
please update soon, although i know you will.
Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hafta have chapter 33! Too wonderful!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you're probably going to get a lot of reviews from me all in once short period of time, but I've decided to comment on every chapter because your fic really impresses me. If it is indeed your first fic (not doubting you; some people have other fandoms, tho.) then you and your beta are doing an excellent job!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like hearing Dudly's thoughts. Seeing this from his perspective was very neat.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This whole chapter was amazing. I've never seen a characterization of Harry quite like this in the five years I've been reading fanfic, and it's so in character and out of character at the same time that it works incredibly. And I love the way you portray Draco. I'm anxious about the next chapter, and want to know what's going on between them, so you've definitely pulled me in!
There was a lot of back and fourth with the "I can't do this, I have to do this [save him]" ect. But what do you expect for sixteen year-olds, eh? So that worked too.
There was a lot of back and fourth with the "I can't do this, I have to do this [save him]" ect. But what do you expect for sixteen year-olds, eh? So that worked too.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! write more! *le hearts you*
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read who the other two are. Please update soon! =o)
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you...I love this story. I soooo want more of it!! they are all so close to the truth...