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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet goddess this is the best story i have read in a long time! Seriously i read constantly i have about 10 books on the go at one time and at least a dozen fics and i can't honestly recall one capturing my interest so quickly and thoroughly. I love Rowling but there is a level of maturity in your characters that hers are only just beginning to reach and i'm not just talking about age either. Yours are not the 2 dimensional stereotypical characters that so many fall prey to. The humour is perfect both sublte and blatant and i have laughed out loud and giggled in equal bouts in between holding my breath and speed reading to find out what happens next. I can't wait for the next instalment, thank you for sharing your talent with us your humble readers!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. As for your fisrt fic, its extrodinary. My first fic sucked arse holes. Two things to improve on is your writing style (which can't be helped unless you write more and HAS improved since you started this fic) and also make sure you keep everything OC. There are some random moments when Draco or Harry will say something that seems OOC and I don't mean for like the cannon Harry or Draco, I mean the Harry and Draco that you present to us. Other than that, I love it and I can't wait til you put the next chapter up. I also wanted to tell you that if you still dont get how to do the mailing list thing, email me and I can give you instructions on how to set one up.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cute, I cant wait for the next update. I rather like the humor and stuff ^^ i rather enjoys the comic and the pix.....You do wonderful drawings.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this Harry XD
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo another good chapter. WHERE is Draco? He should be there???
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fun! Need chapter 40! Harry should have called for Draco. But then Draco would know he's the heir. Wonder when Narcissa finds out?
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Loved it! I love Harry taking charge, and the very end of the chapter, the last few lines of conversation, hilarious! Can't wait for more!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lesley is a nut job. I like him!! And Harry is a bit of a cranky puss, but I can understand why with all of the Council members too afraid, or too lazy to do anything right. And that Loxton fellow, there defiantly needs to be something done about him. He needs to be removed from his position or knocked down a FEW pegs; he
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay so i just finished reading this(by that i mean the entire story). i have been reading a few chapters a night(i am adicted), and so far this story kicks ass, the harry and draco together chapters are my fav....can't wait till they figure it out(tee hee hee). i was sooooo bummed to see the note at the top (boo hoo) oh well as long as you promise to keep writing. major snaps to you.