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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I liked when he said that even though he could never be with her, he\'d protect her on the battlefield if necessary...
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little brief, but nice for a drabble.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought this storiee eis reallyy gooddd... i dink u shoulddd continue itt... or keep on writin moree... or is it finish already? but if itz finish.. u should write a sequel or somedin.. cuzz itz goodd..
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it! if you want you should continue with it it could come out quite interesting
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god girl are you trying to kill us! Not only do you paint a really vivid picture. Hot enough to scorch but then you go and make us want to cry! You need to have a tissue warning with this one! Keep up the good work and keep writing. I\'m looking forward to seeing more from you very soon!!!
~Luna ^__^
~Luna ^__^
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work for your first fanfiction! Sounds interesting I\'ll keep an eye out for it. Update soon..
Rosi
Rosi
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was GREAT!! Don\'t stop!!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Excellent angst here. I wish it wasn\'t a one shot however. It would be a wonderful first chapter for a fic. Please consider it.