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for Belongings

by lukablack

schedule August 4, 2020 at 12:00 AM

An interesting take on what might have happened had Harry dared to return to Hogwarts to see Ginny!  While I understand, and it is ‘canan’ that Harry was jealous of other guys when it came to Ginny, I think the possessiveness of Harry for Giiny in this story is a little out of character.  Harry was consistent in wanting the people he cared about to be safe and happy, even if it meant giving them up.  I also think that Harry wasn’t worried about losing Ginny, I think they both knew that if they both survived, they would be together.  The near exhitionist tendencies that Harry’s behavior in this story hints at is also completely out of character for Harry, and I think for Ginny, too.  The author may find it exciting, and I suppose the fear of discovery and the associated thrills that might provide are part of most young persons early sexual experiences, but I don’t think it would make a difference to Harry, who didn’t care about his family (the Dursleys) at all.

Still, a good account of the intensity of those early encounters.

person Angel in the Dark
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the hottest stories I've read.
person MDR
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Love the dominant Harry. Next chapter I think he should bugger the girl. ;)
person Saico
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was real hot!!
person L. Alta
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and well-written - Harry Potter erotica at its finest.
person MDR
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Love the dominant Harry, and the submissive-yet-mischevious Ginny.
person Mdunlap
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, now I have to imagine what he could be like, perhaps horizontal, not in a hurry, and completely unclothed. Or, you could write it, and I could read it. Please?
person Ciaa
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.......