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by neichan

person Kagaya
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor thing. Poor poor Severus. Ah the sufferings he goes through. *Grin*
Twins again? Severus is going to be surrounded with brats his entire life isn't he.
There there darling. Amrys will probably be a doting father.

Its just like Severus to have contractions and not know it. Hahaha...
Ah it was lovely how Amrys came in and swept him off his feet-literally. And how he was so smug about being a father again.

And I really like the way you skipped the whole cliche thing of Harry and Lucius's wedding and not drag it out with wedding details, long sickeningly sweet vows and blah blah blah.

Is Remus getting close to the were-leopards or what?


Chapter 9+

Sorry for reviewing it all at one go like this.

Dumbledore was a really sick fucktard.
Actually people that acts like him is the worst possible and should be punished and sentenced away for life. Praying on innocent children. Even if they were not children to do so after being trusted to teach and care for them its just so wrong.

And to think he did the sex spell thingy on Harry and Amrys just because a slight and to gets his balls off, I'm glad Madam Pomfrey is in on the good side and punish that pervert.
Ah, Harry has matured quite a lot hasn't he, if it was the old Harry he would have went off the edge thinking he was committing adultery even though he knows deep down it wasn't his fault.
Now, he is more in touch with his feelings and know how to respond accordingly.
Lucius was so understanding, but understanding doesn't mean it doesn't hurt does it. To think it was a necessity which couldn't be avoided must have hurt.
Severus must also have felt like his heart was being torn out.
It was such a touching scene.
The sadness and the hurt I felt when I read that scene, I think anyone who read it would have hated Dumbleduck.

Actually to be more correct, I don't really hate Dumbledore, cause he's suppose to be this saintly indulging grandfather figure.
Rather, I hate what he represents in this fic, adults(old pervert geezers) violating the trust of children and those dependent on them.

Your fic is really touching.

I'm sorry to review so many chapters in one review only. But I really do enjoy reading your fic.


person Night Shade
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals like a girl*(which I am...don't let the name fool you) omg!!! Sev's gonna be married AND changed!!! can't wait till next chapter!!!
person who me?
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries profusely* no fair! I wanted harry to get pregnant *pouts and sniffles* you did this just to spite me didn't you?
person ranni
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet..... Very sweet... Hope to see more soon!
person ranni
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet..... Very sweet... Hope to see more soon!
person Amethystangel
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Now I need some insulin to counteract all that sucrose!

Just kidding. It was a lovely chapter.
person Amethystangel
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's me again...

Any chance of a sequel? Love to see what happens as the two sets of twins grow up together.
person yoblossom
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squee!* omg! yay! please post the last chapter soon! please!
person ranni
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Highly amusing! Hope to see more soon!
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chap