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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! umm.. yeah.. the King has spoken.. not to mention made some legitimate claims *shakes head* wow
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh great chapter... ohhh bad Lucius! poor Harry *hugs Harry* more soon, Lucius better get his head out of his arse and listen to Draco, and what is Graeme\'s problem with Harry anyway? :S jealousy does not become him! more soon cya huni xxxx
whoooo Goblet of Fire today :D :D
whoooo Goblet of Fire today :D :D
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was really enjoying this story. It was different and a fun read. But it\'s boring now. It doesn\'t end. There\'s one crisis after the other but nothing really advances the story. It\'s stagnant despite all the action you\'re working into it. You\'ve got so many separate story lines nd it seems like you\'re struggling to hold them all. In my opinion. I hope you finish the story, then put it aside for a few weeks. Find a good beta and start editing the hell out of this. It has the potential to be an excellent story.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry !!!! It\'s so hard to understand the rules if no one will take the time to explain the rules.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Be sure to keep updating!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!!!! I love this.
I don\'t think you update slow, some fics I read take weeks or even months to be updated. To me you update regularly.
I don\'t think you update slow, some fics I read take weeks or even months to be updated. To me you update regularly.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww. Poor Hawwy:( Still loving this so update:)
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe, poor Harry...
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapters, serves Ad. right, and Tr. sud gets whats cuming son too... oooooh wots this room? must read more soon cya later huni xxx