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very well written and i looooove the fact that you update more than once a week(like every day) that just make my millenia. i do love the plot as well, please continue the good work

HAHAHA I LOVED THE ENDING well i hope that isnt the end i NEED more WANT more CRAVE more of this AMAZING STORY!!!! update SOON!!

phew! I just managed to finish chapter 43. It took me about 6 hours to read the story so far. It\'s really great but I do have some questions that still remain unanswered:
1. I still have no idea how Ron got onto Andromedas leash back in the beggining chapters. Did she force him or was he just being submissive or what?
2.Do the were-cats ever have sex while they\'re in their animal forms?
3.Are there any other older members of the pride exept for the ones mentioned?( like is Arthur Weasly part of the pride but doesn\'t live with them cos he\'s married?)
4.Do the kittens never get to leave the manor? ( don\'t Fred and George have a joke shop to run?)
5.Should\'t Harrys friends at Hogwarts be worried for him( like Hermione) because presumably Harry has spent a couple of months with the pride as he is almost 18 and the school year is almost finished yet the famous Harry Potter has mysteriosly vanished?
6.Are you planning on going into Lucias\'s link with Voldemort?
7. What happened to Lucias\'s father( out of interest)..was he killed in a big fight or something?Or was he not a were-cat?
8.Do the were-cats ever eat? They don\'t seem to ever eat...

Yeah, I think thats about it...oh.wait. another thing. Please watch out for making your chapters turn out anti-climatic...I mean- like the time Lucias was going to punish Harry( and Draco) for sneaking after him when he went to see the were-wolves and you build the end up really nicely so that I think\" harry deffinatly going to get some spanking tonight\" and then at the beginning of the next chapter...Harry and Draco in the baths and in the end nobody got spanked, or even punished for that matter ! The same happened when I thought for sure Greame was going to have sex with Harry and you built the whole chapter up so nicely and I was on the edge of my chair awaiting for Greame to finally...and I go on to the next chapter... and then...nothing!!!! Harrys talking with Yaji! I was totally dissapointed! Couldn\'t you at least of had Greame getting up smugly and walking away??

Oh well, just some creative critisism...use it, don\'t use it...your storys a fantastic read anyway.

I really like your story! Although very different from what I usually read, I came across it the other day and had to read it. I really like Harry in a different form, though this is a bit different. I want to congraduate you on your story. I think that its a first and AWESOME!
~rah~

ok thats just cool!! Voldy cud do this too? wicked! too bad he\'s dead LOL :P

I love it when you update so often:)Keep up with the good work:)

The only thing which annoys me is your continous misspelling of \"god\". Other than this, I think it\'s a brillant story, one of the most original I ever read.

Go away for a few days and come back to . . . Heaven!!!
THIS IS NOT A COMPLAINT!!!! JUST AND OBSERVATION/QUESTION:
The switch between ch. 39 and 40 was abrupt. Draco was supposed to have his say about Harry after the second, but instead you popped into the scene with Harry and the other to get used to his being \"touched\". It went from almost sex and the lingering question about what Draco would say to something else entirely. I, personally, was very interested in how Draco would try to explain Harry and his life to the leapards. Of course, I know you can\'t answer that now because the story has developed so much since then.

Other than that, what a cliffie with throwing that bit about Voldy and the partial change into the mix. But Harry has destroyed Voldy before the story takes place, right? I do look forward to what place Harry will take with his power and his need for affection. Yea, Draco!!!! I hope it\'s a boy!

I want a were-kitten! Or, maybe just Lucius. Wouldn\'t this story make an awesome movie? When you finish posting I want to download the whole thing and keep it, yes?

Yay! Everyone\'s home for the \'holidays\'! Of course, the holiday would feel more welcoming if Trelawney would stop being so damned crazy. And if Andromeda wasn\'t currently being controled by the crazy witch. Two updates in one day. Tsk tsk, you\'re going to make all other authors look terrible. Honestly, though, that\'s a good thing.