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That, was simply cruel. Leaving the story there. In the middle of what seems to be one of the most exciting chapters of the story. A good story as far as I'm conserned, but I would prefer if you'd write a bit longer chapters. But, do keep updating.

That was just too cute! Graeme being a good leopard and looking out for the king's chosen! Imagine that. He is just turning out to be so sweet.

why must sirius be so stubborn? Loved the three chapters i found when i checked on your fic!

i do so love when harry gets his.... just so tastey luc and harry are..

OMG. it's trelawney, isn't it? it's the freaking divination teacher... wow. i didn't see that coming at all. and lucius - god, so very hot. he's smexy! poor harry, he's in for it now.

oh wow. i didn't see that coming at all. now here are my questions: I have an idea of one of two people the bitch could be....1) if it's the first, then what the hell is she doing there? i thought she wasn't allowed at pride gatherings, after she lied to Lucius about her resistance. 2) If it's the other, then still.. what the hell is she doing there? I didn't think she was a were-leopard. And, if since she must be then, why is she imitating her king? of course, i could be completely off and there could be a third bitch. 3) Brothers? so which Weasley brothers are were-leopards? the twins? or maybe there's more of them..... oh well. i'll find out soon i suppose. poor harry, being displayed like that. and naked to boot! and the two guys meeting each other like that, in that setting... ouch.

well, that answers that question... andromeda? maybe not. if she's the mother of the heir, than it's Narcissa, right? because the "heir" is Draco. but, i thought her name was Narcissa Black Malfoy... oh well. i'll figure it out. poor Ron, having a collar like that. Poor Amrys too, having to remove her from the arena.

that was informative. explained a lot

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so, Andromeda and Sybil are in cohoots. no surprise there. however, i have changed my opinion. there's no way the "bitch" can be Narcissa, at least not from what i know of the Malfoy family, including the fact that Narcissa's name doesn't include Andromeda anywhere in it. The only way that whoever this Andromeda is could be Narcissa is if you've changed the dynamics of the Malfoy family. it's fine if you have, but i'd like to know. This woman says that she's the Mother of the Heir, but Lucius said that he was not the Father of the Heir. Now, Draco was supposed to be the heir but can't be turned and I know Lucius and Narcissa are Draco's parents. This Andromeda is still human, but she's obviously not married to Lucius and hasn't been turned even though it seems she can be. And she's had a child that she claims is the heir even though the King isn't his father..... how strange.