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I like it keep going, how many more chapters it is until the end. if you are telling. and do you write story for Fanfiction. just e-mail me with your answer please.

Very exciting!!!!
Why the he** would Sirius align himself with the she-devils to get Harry???
That is the height of stupidity (at least from "my" perspective).
And that scene prior to it was HOT!
I had to open the window and stick my head out. Since there is snow on the ground and I hate to be cold, that should tell you just how hot.
I wonder if the girls want Snape to fix them?

How do you come up with this stuff???
I only just read 2 chapters, go to pick up the car pool and another chapter shows up! Sirius is truly a fool. In your AU, different species don't mix. He could have started a war if you didn't have Graeme (?) go with him. I bet you'll still have Lucius going after them. But Snape is no fool, unless the 2 she-devils took him to fix them. I wonder if Lucius knows it was Sirius? I love the way the G man is acting with Harry, especially since he may not agree with his status as "chosen". And I still wonder if anyone is going to speak up for Harry???? Your action/adventure doesn't leave much wiggle room for expository. Then again, that's one of the reasons I switched from regular books. I bet Lucius thinks the were's are helping the she-devils now. Let the games begin!!

oooo. oh. shit. they're royally screwed. Lucius is going to kill them. on the other note though, Graeme and Amrys aren't the lovers of the king, are they? that's why he got so uptight about Harry's declaration. stupid bastard. and harry, of course, wouldn't take that lying down. literally or otherwise. i believe he'd sooner get into a situation where he might be killed by someone else than just agree with the kitten's role... especially since he still hasn't been told what being chosen means...

Dun dun duuu!! Update:)

YOU'RE DOING IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well i love the chapter. You need to update soon.

obviously little miss "i'm so important" doesn't know that Lucius already made a deal with Tambyn, for Christopher to be well treated, and that there's a new mother in the pride, one who will be bearing the real heir. you know what would make this more perfect? if harry got pregnant too.... ^_^

Noooouuu!Sirius what have you done! I hope Snape will be fine and the two bitches killed!!Update:)

You can't apparate into Hogwarts (insert here Hermione, scowling and waving "Hogwarts, a history").
I'm sorry if I'm nagging. I love your story, but I'm a nit-picker.

Incredible. Very... stimulating. A very good story as far as I know. But I would definitely wish that there would be in a few chapters about Harry and Lucius in their were forms. I somehow like the idea of the two of them, curled up around each other. Perhaps you could add the second and the tirhd in the pile as well. Anyway, you don't, of course, have to use this ideas. Anyway, please update soon.