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Mahahahahaaa!!! Eat that Tambyn!!! You evil offspring of satan!!! UPDATE!!! Pretty Please:):):):)

Wow, what an absolutely awesome story! I love it! And of course I love even more that you update so regulary. That's just so hard to find!
I love the pride and find their rules and structure just fascinating -poor Harry but he does need to learn to adjust.
I did have a couple questions while reading, but -of course- I've completely forgotten them now.
I really enjoy reading this story and wonder if there's anything else you've written. I can't seem to find the yahoo group you mention on your auther side.

*happy dance* yay! they've got him there!

I love this story. I ventured upon it at Knockturn Alley and read up to the 105 chapters you had posted there (at the time). Later on, when I went back to reread and see if you had posted any more chapters, it was gone and I couldn't find it! I can't begin to tell you how dismayed I was. THEN, to, by chance, look in to the Harry/Lucius section of AFF and find it, albeit with less chapters than I had already read. I'm VERY glad you are posting this story here.

holy shit. i mean, just, shit! they're tearing each other apart. i'm sitting here, yelling at my computer, at Lucius, for beng such a thrice-damned cocky idoitic asshole. for not understanding that love does that to you, comes at you by surprise and takes everything you have, leaving nothing in return. I know exactly how harry feels, having experienced it myself.... your heart may be an organ, but it's capable of some overwhelming things. you just think you're going to die when you lose a love like that. and harry can't fathom that his not wanting to have sex with every person he's ordered to is the same as loving lucius and being pride, because to him it isn't. poor harry, he's screaming and his emotions are tearing lucius apart and lucius' screams are torturing the whole pride and the Council. please continue ASAP.

I'm kinda upset i just read chapter 39 and was kinda disappointed... Harry was soooo weak.. I wanted him to show the both of them up for hurting him... That he's human .... say NO.... arrg... im really upset it's almost pathetic. I'd have to say i dont think i'm going to read anymore. But Up till then awesome job.

Holly frick it...

Ok got no clue what ta say here i really don't. I swear it was liek you could almost feal the pain both of them were in with that last chapter. It was just...just...beautiful i guess is teh best word. Yes it was sad, very sad, but it was still beautiful. The pain they had to both be feeling for something like that to happen? It is an odd kind of beauty that most wouldn't apperishate, but it is what i call it. It is an odd sort of bond that has formed between them, the pain in one echoing in the other, ones screams driving the other to a howl of true pain, anguish, and loss. The howl of the second driving the screams and cries of pain from teh first even worse. Then behind it all a pack, the seeers, a second, and a third who can do nothing about any of it. It is a veyr odd kind of beatuty and a very odd kinda of bond, but both are there...

So lets see if these all knowing seers can find it too or if they are going to kill both men and possiably the pack by trying to pull them apart...

Oh and sorry about any spelling or junk

wow. that was emotional. the both of them idiots. beating each other up over the smallest things and yet they're pasts and behaviors still impede them, forcing them to act differently than they might otherwise, if it were just the two of them. The Seer made a lot of sense, and not only that, but he helped them realize that whether they love others and have sex with others, it always boils down to the fact that they are meant for each other and as long as he's king, harry will be chosen. fabulous! please write more

I really like this story. But, frankly, I think Harry needs to kick some ass and take names. I certainly don't think he should start have sex with who ever Lucius decides to share him with.