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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YaY!:) Update!!
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. At first I was a bit miffed with the whole were leapord thing. I was confused as to how this whole society wasn't even mentioned before. I understand that it couldn't have been mentioned in the books or movies but you had Harry was completely unaware of them. To tell the truth that still gets me a little, but the stories so good it doesn't even matter.
I love the Harry/Lucious pairing, they're my favorite.You have the whole were-leapord society hierarchy very believable, realistic even. Same with the were-wolves. You must have done a lot of pre-planning for the society structures to already be in place when the story starts. None of the laws seem out of place. That's not an easy thing to do.
I could go on and on; if fact i probably will in other reviews, something for you to look forward to. But one thing is really, really bugging me. What makes Remus different from the other were-wolves? You kept the original nature of his lycro.... (I can't spell it but I think you get what i mean) but it's so different from the rest of the pack. Would you tell us what makes him so different?
I love the Harry/Lucious pairing, they're my favorite.You have the whole were-leapord society hierarchy very believable, realistic even. Same with the were-wolves. You must have done a lot of pre-planning for the society structures to already be in place when the story starts. None of the laws seem out of place. That's not an easy thing to do.
I could go on and on; if fact i probably will in other reviews, something for you to look forward to. But one thing is really, really bugging me. What makes Remus different from the other were-wolves? You kept the original nature of his lycro.... (I can't spell it but I think you get what i mean) but it's so different from the rest of the pack. Would you tell us what makes him so different?
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those two are absolutely scary when they team up. If Lucius knows what's good for him, he'll concede... eventually.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great update asap i love this story!!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well, amazing two last chapters, but how Harry is going to feel next day? And will there be brides still comming?
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that was ceratinly interesting. Not bad.. Not bad.. Can't wait to see what happens. Once again your speed and great writing are beyong compare. I hope not to be dissapointed and look forward to more good 'happy' chapters.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gahnhfhghngg...hot! Update my God!!!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little perplexed on this two new chapters. Not that they weren't great! I'm tottering here... will harry be the wife..... or are you at least gonna get a nice wife who harry get's along with... Personally harry should be the he-queen. Actually i think it would be wicked awesome if harry finally was like :fuck the damn traditons i've had enough, which one is scarrier-your old laws or me showing you the true meaning of fear: Now wouldn't that be entertaining.. Go Harry screw the traditions-"they don't work for you and you don't work for them"!!! Hehehehe! Once again your speed in putting out the chapters is beyond compare... Hope to see more soon!
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.0.... more please
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well......just update:):):):):)